Teacher's Summary
You've created an intriguing scene with vivid imagery! With a few corrections in spelling and grammar, your writing will be even clearer and more impactful. Keep up the good work!
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Leeli hoped on the dog who was very big now becuse of the first well. A big black storm was coming. The horned hounds were together by the maner. It was taerafieng.
Issues Summary
"hoped on"
→ Suggestion: hopped onto
The correct phrase is 'hopped onto' when referring to getting on an animal. This small change improves the clarity of your writing.
"becuse"
→ Suggestion: because
This is a simple spelling mistake. Make sure to double-check your spelling to enhance the professionalism of your writing.
"maner"
→ Suggestion: manner
This word is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'manner.' Paying attention to spelling will help convey your ideas more clearly.
"taerafieng"
→ Suggestion: terrifying
This word is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'terrifying.' Correct spelling is crucial for effective communication.
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