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Teddy Buchs
April 30, 2026 at 05:38 PM
4 issues
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The author says that reactive people are like a can of soda. You can shake them and they will suddenly pop. Proactive people are like water, you can shake them and shake them but they will never explo…
punctuation: 3
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 30, 2026 at 02:10 PM
6 issues
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The author says that when he was writing a book he took a vacation to Hawaii for one year. He recharged in beauty, peace and quiet. He also learned that although talking about these habits he was not…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 3
matthias
April 29, 2026 at 07:29 PM
5 issues
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Tink lite a torch, but when he lite it the fangs came. They went to the weapon room, but they remembered they needed the map, it had the code to the door. Then Tink remembered the code looked like a W…
spelling: 2
grammar: 2
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 29, 2026 at 06:02 PM
3 issues
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A man was complaining to the author about how his wife doesn't seem to love him anymore, and he doesn't seem to love her anymore. The author told him to love her. The man said that the author doesn't …
grammar: 2
spelling: 1
nathaniel
April 29, 2026 at 02:43 PM
1 issue
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The author also says that synergizing is a system, and it includes all the first five habits. Be proactive, begin with the end in mind, put first things first, think win/win, seek to understand before…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 28, 2026 at 09:25 PM
6 issues
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The author said that he had a son who was very shy and nervous around the public. When he was in 2nd grade his father signed him up for baseball practice and the son played dead the whole practice. Th…
grammar: 3
punctuation: 3
nathaniel
April 28, 2026 at 02:03 PM
1 issue
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The sixth habit is synergize. That means that the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. One of those parts is the relationship of those parts.
This is probably the most important part, beca…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 27, 2026 at 08:03 PM
4 issues
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The author showed a bunch of things that people wrote to him. The things that people wrote were problems that they had. One guy said that he worked and worked and now has a thriving business, but he f…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
matthias
April 27, 2026 at 05:56 PM
3 issues
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there was scoul face at the ankel jeley manor.
spelling: 3
nathaniel
April 27, 2026 at 01:45 PM
7 issues
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The author gives the example of the fifth habit, which is seek to understand before being understood, in the example it is a son talking to his father about school. The father is trying to give his ad…
punctuation: 2
grammar: 4
capitalization: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 23, 2026 at 10:20 PM
3 issues
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The author was talking about a boy who got hit in the head when he was younger. The boy was not good at math and his father told him that every night they were going to do math flashcards. The father …
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 23, 2026 at 08:41 PM
4 issues
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The author says that relationships are one of the keys to success. That's why it's so important to think win/win and others success is yours. He also says pride gets no pleasure out having something o…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
matthias
April 23, 2026 at 06:03 PM
3 issues
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Janneres hands were cold and were tide up. He could hear Tink screeming but all he could see was the sea and black red eyes.
spelling: 2
syntax: 1
nathaniel
April 23, 2026 at 01:31 AM
3 issues
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The author says the fourth habit is think win/win. In certain situations you lose/win, win/lose, or lose/lose. The chart he draws is based on courage and consideration. So in the case of the most cons…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 23, 2026 at 01:19 AM
4 issues
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The author talks about a boss who has a worker who wasn't doing his work as well as he should have. The boss told him that he is doing a great job and that everybody who worked in the past was satisfi…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
syntax: 2
matthias
April 22, 2026 at 05:11 PM
3 issues
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Podo and the boys were going to save Leeli and Nia. Podo told the boys the plan. On their way they went into a house and in the house was oskar he was bleeding they asked what hapend and he said zouza…
syntax: 1
spelling: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 21, 2026 at 10:14 PM
5 issues
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The author talked about a boss who's workers weren't doing what they were suppose to do. The boss wrote a number on the floor. When the workers saw it someone told them that it was because they didn't…
grammar: 3
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
matthias
April 21, 2026 at 02:41 PM
4 issues
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Nia and Leeli were hiding. Their was somebody up stairs walking. And then their was a crash. Nia felt like a stuck animal. Then she felt like it was Osker and his book shelf fell over but when she hea…
grammar: 2
spelling: 2
nathaniel
April 21, 2026 at 01:02 PM
4 issues
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The author gives other examples of putting first things first, like a pilot and his passengers. He also talks about promises, and how you should just generally try and keep them. He says if you talk a…
grammar: 4
nathaniel
April 21, 2026 at 01:25 AM
2 issues
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The author says that the third habit is to put first things first. the order can go like mission statement, roles, goals. The main thing is putting urgent before not urgent.
If you put first th…
punctuation: 1
spelling: 1
matthias
April 20, 2026 at 09:04 PM
0 issues
They were making a plan which Peet didn't like.
Teddy Buchs
April 20, 2026 at 05:22 PM
3 issues
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The author was telling this story about a man who wanted his apartment rent to go down. The people around him told him not to bother because the landlord is a stubborn man. The guy had the landlord co…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
matthias
April 16, 2026 at 11:58 PM
5 issues
Peet the sock man comes to save the famaly. Podo got out to steel a fangs sword to help Peet. Nia told the kids to falow her. Janner stole away and stabed a fang.
spelling: 4
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 16, 2026 at 05:58 PM
2 issues
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The author told a story about a poor boy who dropped out of school when he was 13 and he became a famous editor. The boy interviewed tons of famous people asking them about themselves.
The author sai…
grammar: 2
nathaniel
April 16, 2026 at 04:20 PM
5 issues
The author says that the second habit is begin with the end in mind. So may people just do the next thing without reason. some Examples are getting the next degree or a promotion. But they sacrifice t…
grammar: 2
spelling: 1
punctuation: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 16, 2026 at 02:07 AM
4 issues
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The author talks about how when he was a salesman he always was nice the the people at this one store. One day the owner of the store didn't give him anything, and he came back later and the owner gav…
spelling: 2
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 15, 2026 at 04:26 PM
5 issues
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The author points out that your response and attitude is more important toward the outcome that directly affects you than what any other person can do. If act like Viktor Frankl in Nazi Germany you ca…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 2
matthias
April 15, 2026 at 01:13 PM
1 issue
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Janner was thinking about how he missed his home. Tink was in the corner. Podo was awake with Leeli and Nia sleeping on him. Janner and Podo had a long talk and Tink heard it and looked out the window…
syntax: 1
nathaniel
April 14, 2026 at 04:17 PM
7 issues
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He says that the there are some important things about habits, such as they can always be broken, and they are always built up. You need three things to get a habit knowledge,(why to?),skill,(how to),…
grammar: 3
punctuation: 4
Teddy Buchs
April 14, 2026 at 03:49 PM
2 issues
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The second chapter was about what other people want. Show interest in other people. The 3rd chapter was about getting people to show what they really want.
The author talks about how when he goes …
grammar: 2
matthias
April 14, 2026 at 02:23 PM
3 issues
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When the children got back the fangs were ataking the house. One of the fangs captured Leeli. Then everybody got captured. The fangs were looking for a trasour and they thghout Nia had it.
spelling: 3
Teddy Buchs
April 13, 2026 at 05:18 PM
4 issues
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The author was talking about how a boss went to his workers who were required to wear protective helmets and he would yell at them to wear them when they didn't but they didn't listen. When the boss w…
grammar: 2
spelling: 2
matthias
April 13, 2026 at 03:59 PM
4 issues
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Leeli asked peet if they could go to his casle and he said yes. It was in a tree so it was heard for Leeli to climb it so peet helped.
spelling: 2
grammar: 2
nathaniel
April 13, 2026 at 02:03 PM
2 issues
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PARAGRAPH 1
If you want to accomplish something you need to have the right attitude, but at the same …
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 09, 2026 at 09:09 PM
2 issues
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Ben-Hur
Judah is talking with an Egyptian woman who is very beautiful to him. Judah's old servant said that she practically controls him. She is the same woman who told him a story on the boat. Judah…
grammar: 1
syntax: 1
matthias
April 09, 2026 at 04:52 PM
3 issues
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Nia was making a disg.Husting meal for the fangs. it was raining so the kids had no choice but to do their T.H.AG.S.
spelling: 1
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 09, 2026 at 01:27 PM
2 issues
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Judah is in love with Iras Balthasar's daughter but, plot twist, she is actually in love with Massala, and is going to reveal all Judah's secrets if he doesn't send an absolutely massive amount of mo…
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 09, 2026 at 01:23 AM
2 issues
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Judah talked about how he saw Jesus turn water into wine, heal lepers, heal the blind, and do other miracles. His old servant heard that and ran to tell Judah's mother and sister. They think that if t…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
matthias
April 08, 2026 at 05:48 PM
1 issue
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Peet saves Nia and Podo. Janner was hopping the leter he sent would make it.
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 08, 2026 at 01:10 AM
3 issues
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Judah travels and stops at a place where a lot of people are. There is a Nazarite who is saying," behold the lamb of God who takes away the sin of the world". Judah new that the savior was there and h…
punctuation: 2
spelling: 1
matthias
April 07, 2026 at 07:03 PM
6 issues
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A ratbadgger bit Slarb's leg and itwas wounded. While he was going back to the jail he was thingking of eating the chidren. when he past the other fangs they lagpht at him.
spelling: 5
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 07, 2026 at 02:15 PM
2 issues
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Judah is woken by Amrah and led to the house that he used to live in. according to her the romans don't actually own it and it's his. he moves in their taking a bunch of the stuff that Simon has gotte…
punctuation: 1
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 06, 2026 at 09:29 PM
3 issues
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Judah goes to a group of guys and they talk. While they are talking someone is fighting the priests and they go and fight them. After they fight them Judah tells them to meet him in Bethlehem and they…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
matthias
April 06, 2026 at 07:34 PM
2 issues
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Nia and Pudo were captured by the fangs. Slarbs leg was wounded and bleedng.
grammar: 1
spelling: 1
nathaniel
April 06, 2026 at 02:44 PM
2 issues
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Judah goes to his old house to see if he can find information about his mother and sister. His mother and sister are also going to the house to see it one last time before getting cast out. Ben Hur in…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 04, 2026 at 02:34 AM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
Judah's mother and his sister are in prison for 8 years. Somebody lets them go and they are lepers. They beg by the gate and then see their old slave. They talk to her and she brings them foo…
nathaniel
April 03, 2026 at 03:42 PM
7 issues
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Judah has won the race, and at the same time crippled Masala for life. Unknown to him his sister and mother have been found while he was looking for them. He was sure and hoped that they had died well…
punctuation: 2
spelling: 2
grammar: 3
Teddy Buchs
April 03, 2026 at 02:42 AM
0 issues
Beb-Hur
Judah is on a porch and a man comes. The man was told by Messila to kill Judah. Judah talks with the guy for a while and they realize that the man had met Judah's dad. Judah hires him to go …
matthias
April 02, 2026 at 05:20 PM
2 issues
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Peet saved Leeli and when they got home she thanked him. Then their grandpa came back. They told their grandpa what hapend. Their grandpa had a story to tell to.
spelling: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 01, 2026 at 10:12 PM
2 issues
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Judah is starting a riot by getting people to bet money on him. the race is almost underway and Mathasala told everyone Judah's true origin. But it turns out to get him a bigger fan base.
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 01, 2026 at 09:05 PM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
Judah starts the race and people are betting against him, saying that Messila will win. Judah is using the best horses there and beats Messila. Messila gets injured and people thought that he…
matthias
April 01, 2026 at 04:29 PM
4 issues
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When the boys came bake Nia asked were Leeli and Pudo were. When they went in side Janner was thinking about Leeli. Leeli was trying as hard as she could to get out but she couldn't.
spelling: 2
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 01, 2026 at 12:21 AM
1 issue
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The father and daughter who were mentioned before told Judah that they took the money that Judah had left, and made it into 600 denarii. Judah was the richest man, not a king. Judah gave then 500 of i…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 31, 2026 at 07:04 PM
0 issues
Judah is trying out the horses. He goes on a boat with this Egyptian woman and she tells him a story. She says there was a girl who was the most beautiful girl there was. The king married her but she …
nathaniel
March 31, 2026 at 02:57 PM
0 issues
Judah is dumbfounded to find that the sheik and Simon are in cahoots. And he also confirms his fear that Esther is in love with him. And Balthasar left with his daughter. They will come back for the r…
matthias
March 31, 2026 at 01:01 PM
5 issues
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Pudo was happy to see so many thwaps in the garden. The children were studying their T.H.A.G.S. After their lunch pudo took the children into town. The children went to the book store while zouzab wa…
grammar: 4
spelling: 1
nathaniel
March 30, 2026 at 03:20 PM
0 issues
Judah is on a date with the Egyptian girl and she is telling him stories about Egypt. Mathasala is starting to figure out Ben Hur and Simon is also. The race is not very far away and Judah has the bes…
matthias
March 25, 2026 at 07:09 PM
3 issues
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Janner tried to put a plank over the pasagway twice but it didn't work. Then they heard the ghost and ran. on their way home they saw their grandpa with a sake of thwaps.
spelling: 2
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
March 25, 2026 at 03:33 PM
3 issues
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Judah talks and talks with Balthazar the Egyptian. He would have like to go and find the Christ himself but he had no idea where to find him so he had to be satisfied with Balthazar's account. Simon i…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 2
Teddy Buchs
March 25, 2026 at 01:25 AM
3 issues
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Judah meets a traveler and goes to the stadium with him. He decides to rent out some animals so he could compete against Mellissa who was the Roman he used to be friends with. The father and daughter …
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
nathaniel
March 24, 2026 at 05:40 PM
2 issues
Ilderim sheik is going to let Judah ride his horse in the race, he also introduces him to Balthazar. He is the Egyptian who went to meet baby Jesus.
punctuation: 1
grammar: 1
matthias
March 24, 2026 at 04:29 PM
6 issues
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The boys found them themselves in a room as big as their cottage all around were odd shaped objects. Janner went too the closest one. It had dust all over it and then Janner sneezed and the dust went …
grammar: 1
spelling: 2
punctuation: 2
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 23, 2026 at 11:30 PM
0 issues
Mathasala is starting to hear of this son on Aurelius the Duumvir. But he in his normal calm state doesn't let on about his worry. Ben Hur is growing in Esther and Simon's favor as his deeds and dedic…
Teddy Buchs
March 23, 2026 at 11:29 PM
0 issues
Judah is looking for his mother and sister. He stops at somebody's house and tells him who he is and asks them if they have seen them. They say no and he leaves. The father of the family tells his dau…
matthias
March 23, 2026 at 04:06 PM
2 issues
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Janner's head felt like it was asleep for days. Tink hurling a stone missed the hound. Janner shook away the dizziness to help his brother throe stones at the hounds. When a stone hit a hound it beca…
grammar: 1
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 19, 2026 at 04:41 PM
0 issues
Judah is ready for the race. Simon is ready for Judah, and so is Esther. Judah's enemy is starting to lose fans and Judah gains them as the betting begins. Judah's enemy still doesn't know who Judah i…
matthias
March 19, 2026 at 04:34 PM
3 issues
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The boys went into the house. They went into a dark room and when they went into the kitchen with no roof Janner felt a lot better with the light. Then they heard something out side it sounded like t…
spelling: 1
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 18, 2026 at 07:22 PM
1 issue
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Ben-Hur
The ship sails to sea. The ship gets in a fight at sea and gets sunk. Judah survives and holds on to a board. The Roman who was talking to him before gives him his ring to free him from slave…
spelling: 1
matthias
March 18, 2026 at 05:35 PM
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The boys went into a courtyard their were three statues one was a fat man eating a lamb chop which made Tinks belly growl loudly. Another one was a laughing women swinging a terrified cat by its leg.…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 18, 2026 at 03:23 PM
1 issue
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Ben Hur passes Simon's test and is getting ready for the chariot racing. He meets a person from his youth and plans to humiliate him in the race when he learns that he is the one who sent away his fam…
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 17, 2026 at 11:58 PM
5 issues
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Ben-Hur
Three years later a Roman is goes onto a ship and askes about the rowers. Someone tells him that they were slaves. The roman goes to look at them and he finds Judah. Judah explains why he is …
grammar: 2
spelling: 3
nathaniel
March 17, 2026 at 02:06 PM
0 issues
Judah is told by Simon to go a certain grove that is full of delight. But what he didn't tell him was that it is a trap for people who are weak and easily turned astray. He is being tested by Simon to…
Teddy Buchs
March 16, 2026 at 06:10 PM
1 issue
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Ben-Hur
The Jew who went home was named Judah. Judah lived with his mother and sister. They were rich. Judah tells his family that he wants to be a soldier. Right after Judah tells them that he hears…
punctuation: 1
matthias
March 16, 2026 at 04:45 PM
4 issues
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The boys looked at the map. Then Janner saw that it was a map of Glippwood by Reteep who said who ever reads it gets their fingers cut off. Just then he came…
grammar: 1
spelling: 1
punctuation: 2
nathaniel
March 16, 2026 at 12:34 PM
5 issues
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After Ben-Hur left the former slave's house, whose name was Simon, he went farther into to town to find a place to stay. But Simon didn't think he was a Hur and so he sent a servant after him to watch…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 2
syntax: 2
nathaniel
March 13, 2026 at 02:41 PM
1 issue
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Ben Hur is released from slavery by his master during a pirate raid. He goes into town searching for his family. He meets one of his father's servants and his daughter Esther. He points Judah Ben Hur …
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 12, 2026 at 07:47 PM
1 issue
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Ben-Hur
The Jew goes home and he is acting strange. His servant brings him food and askes him why he is acting strange. He tells her that his friend came back from Rome after 5 years. His friend is c…
spelling: 1
matthias
March 12, 2026 at 03:16 PM
3 issues
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Janner and Tink were working hard lifting crates. the last box had books in it. oscar put that one their to look at it later. when they looked at they saw all kinds of books Janner found a pirate book…
punctuation: 1
grammar: 2
nathaniel
March 12, 2026 at 12:18 PM
3 issues
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Judah is revealing to his sister his dream of becoming a solider, when the new head guy over Judea is traveling through. Judah goes to the roof to see him, but while up there he knocks a stone off th…
spelling: 1
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 11, 2026 at 07:39 PM
1 issue
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Ben-Hur
The wise men go and visit the baby Jesus. The author talks about 21 years later. Herod died a year after Jesus was born. He died such a miserable death that the Christians believed that he w…
grammar: 1
matthias
March 11, 2026 at 05:15 PM
4 issues
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Podo Tink and Janner went into town after lunch which was apples and butter bread. the boys were geting more anxious the closer they got to main street becuse some fangs mite be waching them.
punctuation: 1
spelling: 3
nathaniel
March 11, 2026 at 01:41 PM
1 issue
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Herod is Dead and his sons are fighting for the throne when Rome just gives it to a random military officer to offend the Jews. We are then introduced to a new character named Judah. He is talking to …
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 11, 2026 at 01:35 PM
2 issues
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Ben-Hur
The three men who where mentioned in the beginning came to Bethlehem to see the baby. They come to one of Herod's soldiers and ask him where the Christ, the king of Israel is born. The soldie…
grammar: 1
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 09, 2026 at 04:53 PM
1 issue
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Joseph and Mary came to Bethlehem looking for a place to stay. When they couldn't find anywhere to stay, the innkeeper led them to a house on the side of a mountain that hooked up to a cave. It was w…
spelling: 1
matthias
March 09, 2026 at 04:40 PM
6 issues
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The children ate there diner which was cheesy chowder. There grandpa asked what the delicious food was even when there grandpa has it all the time. Janner new that his grandpa was happy even thou he c…
grammar: 3
spelling: 2
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 09, 2026 at 04:40 PM
1 issue
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Ben-Hur
The author describes Mary and Joseph. He says that Mary had golden hair and Joseph was a carpenter. Mary and Joseph go the Bethlehem and Mary gives birth to a baby in a cave. People come to v…
grammar: 1
nathaniel
March 06, 2026 at 01:08 PM
2 issues
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We are brought to the market in Jerusalem and shown all the sins of the Jews. The Jews worship idols, and let people from other nations take part in there market. They sell things in the temple and ho…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 06, 2026 at 02:46 AM
2 issues
Ben-Hur
The three men who met are the wise men who brought gifts to Jesus. They talk together about Moses and the ten plagues. The author tells about Israel and what its like at that time. The author…
grammar: 1
capitalization: 1
nathaniel
March 05, 2026 at 03:37 PM
1 issue
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Three men meet in the middle of the dessert and talk about the holy spirit and God. One is Balthasar the Egyptian, the other two are Ethiopians. They confirm each other in the faith by telling stories…
spelling: 1
matthias
March 05, 2026 at 03:27 PM
4 issues
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The Igiby children go to the fangs jail the. Fangs left the sell. Tink and Leeli fell asleep wile Janner was thinking of a way to get out. When the fangs came back they were going to sell the children…
syntax: 1
grammar: 2
spelling: 1
matthias
March 04, 2026 at 08:48 PM
5 issues
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Four fangs soround the igiby children.They were going to throe them of the cliff.They took Tink and Leeli to the carage.
spelling: 4
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 04, 2026 at 08:46 PM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
A man is traveling through the desert and is lonely. He comes to a stop and gets off of his camel. He sets up a tent, eats, and feeds the animal. The man sees someone coming and thanks God. …
nathaniel
March 04, 2026 at 08:42 PM
2 issues
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Robinson finds three men who have been captured by mutineers. He then leads his small army to save the ship that mutineers have. they succeed and the mutineers are killed and captured. Robinson then g…
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 03, 2026 at 07:04 PM
3 issues
Walking Out
A boy named David goes hunting with his father for grouse. H shoots many shots but does not hit any. The next year his father takes him moose hunting, and they stay at a cabin each night…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 2
Teddy Buchs
March 03, 2026 at 06:56 PM
5 issues
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Walking Out
A boy named David goes hunting with his father for grouse. He shoots a ton of shots but does not hit any. The next year his father takes him moose hunting, and they stay at a cabin each n…
syntax: 2
punctuation: 2
grammar: 1
nathaniel
March 03, 2026 at 02:41 PM
5 issues
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Robinson Crusoe has been teaching a cannibal he named Friday about being civilized, he is a good student and faithful comrade. they see the other cannibals and are going to save their prisoners. one …
punctuation: 4
capitalization: 1
Test
March 03, 2026 at 11:51 AM
7 issues
Yesterday I went to the store and I seen my friend who was buying apples oranges and bread he didnt have enough money, so he ask me if I could loan him five dollars I said sure why not but then the ca…
grammar: 2
punctuation: 4
syntax: 1
Test
March 03, 2026 at 11:50 AM
0 issues
this is a test