Teacher's Summary
You've created an engaging narrative with interesting characters! With some attention to spelling, punctuation, and grammar, your writing will become even clearer and more impactful.
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Janner had a lot of questones on the way to Peets house. Peet was mad at Podo so when they got to Peets house Peet helped every body up, but not Podo.
Issues Summary
"questones"
→ Suggestion: questions
The word 'questones' is a misspelling of 'questions.' Double-checking spelling can help ensure clarity in your writing.
"Peets house"
→ Suggestion: Peet's house
The possessive form 'Peet's' indicates that the house belongs to Peet. Using apostrophes correctly is important for showing ownership.
"every body"
→ Suggestion: everybody
'Every body' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'everybody,' which refers to all people collectively.
"Peets house Peet helped every body up"
→ Suggestion: Peet's house, Peet helped everybody up
A comma is needed after 'Peet's house' to separate the two independent clauses for better readability.
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