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Teacher's Summary
This writing sample effectively sets a vivid scene with action and tension. With a minor adjustment to the syntax, it will enhance clarity and flow.
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The family ran into the woods, the fangs and the horned hounds were chasing them.
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Syntax
"the fangs and the horned hounds were chasing them"
→ Suggestion: the fangs, and the horned hounds were chasing them
The sentence contains a comma splice, which occurs when two independent clauses are joined without appropriate punctuation. Adding a comma before 'and' helps clarify the sentence structure.
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The family ran into the woods, the fangs, and the horned hounds were chasing them.