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Teacher's Summary
This writing sample has a good narrative flow and captures the action well. With a few corrections in spelling and punctuation, it can be even clearer and more engaging.
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They were pulling the donkey so that they could keep runing. The donkey would not move but it moved when Leeli said come on.
Issues Summary
Spelling
"runing"
→ Suggestion: running
The word 'runing' is a misspelling; the correct spelling is 'running'. Double-checking spelling can help improve clarity.
Punctuation
"but it moved when Leeli said come on."
→ Suggestion: but it moved when Leeli said, 'come on.'
There should be a comma before the quotation to separate the dialogue from the rest of the sentence, which helps clarify the speaker's words.
Error Breakdown
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They were pulling the donkey so that they could keep running. The donkey would not move but it moved when Leeli said; come on.'