Teacher's Summary
You've created an engaging story about the children and their grandpa! With some careful attention to grammar and spelling, your writing will become even clearer and more impactful. Keep up the good work!
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The children ate there diner which was cheesy chowder. There grandpa asked what the delicious food was even when there grandpa has it all the time. Janner new that his grandpa was happy even thou he couldn't see him. although the point was the children were home.
Issues Summary
"there diner"
→ Suggestion: their dinner
The word 'there' is used incorrectly; it should be 'their' to indicate possession.
"There grandpa"
→ Suggestion: Their grandpa
Similar to the previous error, 'There' should be 'Their' to show that the grandpa belongs to the children.
"there grandpa has it"
→ Suggestion: their grandpa has it
Again, 'there' should be replaced with 'their' to indicate possession.
"Janner new"
→ Suggestion: Janner knew
'New' is a misspelling; it should be 'knew,' the past tense of 'know.'
"thou"
→ Suggestion: though
'Thou' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'though' to convey the intended meaning.
"although the point was the children were home."
→ Suggestion: Although the point was that the children were home.
The sentence should start with a capital 'A' and 'that' is needed for clarity.
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