Teacher's Summary
This writing sample has a creative premise and captures the characters' emotions well. With some attention to spelling and punctuation, it can become even clearer and more engaging.
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Podo Tink and Janner went into town after lunch which was apples and butter bread. the boys were geting more anxious the closer they got to main street becuse some fangs mite be waching them.
Issues Summary
"which was apples and butter bread."
→ Suggestion: which was apples and butter bread.
This sentence is a bit unclear due to the lack of a comma before 'which.' Adding a comma helps clarify that the phrase is non-restrictive.
"the boys were geting more anxious"
→ Suggestion: the boys were getting more anxious
The word 'geting' is a misspelling; it should be 'getting' to convey the correct meaning.
"becuse"
→ Suggestion: because
'Becuse' is a misspelling; the correct spelling is 'because.'
"mite be waching them."
→ Suggestion: might be watching them.
'Mite' should be 'might,' and 'waching' should be 'watching' to use the correct forms of these words.
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