Teacher's Summary
You've created an interesting scene with vivid imagery! With a few adjustments to grammar and syntax, your writing will be even clearer and more engaging. Keep up the good work!
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The boys went into a courtyard their were three statues one was a fat man eating a lamb chop which made Tinks belly growl loudly. Another one was a laughing women swinging a terrified cat by its leg. And another was a weeping and scratching his large belly with a rake.
Issues Summary
"their were"
→ Suggestion: there were
The correct phrase is 'there were,' which indicates existence. 'Their' is a possessive pronoun and does not fit in this context.
"a laughing women"
→ Suggestion: a laughing woman
The word 'women' is the plural form of 'woman.' Since you are referring to one individual, 'woman' should be used.
"And another was a weeping and scratching his large belly with a rake."
→ Suggestion: And another was a weeping man who was scratching his large belly with a rake.
The original phrase lacks clarity; adding 'man who was' makes it clear who is weeping and scratching.
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