Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an intriguing scene with vivid imagery. With some attention to spelling, syntax, and punctuation, the clarity and flow of your writing can be greatly improved. Keep up the good work and continue refining your skills!
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The boys went into the house. They went into a dark room and when they went into the kitchen with no roof Janner felt a lot better with the light. Then they heard something out side it sounded like the sound that was made when they had come in. Then Janner saw a something that looked like a dog but with tusks and a horn. It was a horned hound. The hound looked right at the boys and howled loudly Janner could think of nothing but to go further into the manor.
Issues Summary
"out side"
→ Suggestion: outside
The word 'outside' is misspelled as 'out side.' Remember to check for common compound words that should be written together.
"a something"
→ Suggestion: something
The phrase 'a something' is awkward and unnecessary; simply using 'something' is clearer and more effective.
"howled loudly Janner could think of nothing but to go further"
→ Suggestion: howled loudly. Janner could think of nothing but to go further
There should be a period between 'loudly' and 'Janner' to separate the two independent clauses for better clarity.
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