Teacher's Summary
You've created an intriguing scene with Janner and the ghost! With a few spelling and punctuation corrections, your writing will be even clearer and more engaging. Keep up the good work!
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Janner tried to put a plank over the pasagway twice but it didn't work. Then they heard the ghost and ran. on their way home they saw their grandpa with a sake of thwaps.
Issues Summary
"pasagway"
→ Suggestion: passageway
The word 'pasagway' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'passageway'. Double-checking spelling can enhance clarity.
"on their way home"
→ Suggestion: On their way home,
The sentence should start with a capital letter and include a comma after the introductory phrase for proper punctuation.
"sake of thwaps"
→ Suggestion: sack of thwaps
The word 'sake' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'sack'. Ensuring the right word choice improves the overall meaning.
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