Teacher's Summary
You've crafted an engaging narrative that captures the reader's attention! With some attention to spelling and grammar, your writing will become even clearer and more impactful. Keep up the great work!
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When the boys came bake Nia asked were Leeli and Pudo were. When they went in side Janner was thinking about Leeli. Leeli was trying as hard as she could to get out but she couldn't.
Issues Summary
"bake"
→ Suggestion: back
The word 'bake' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'back,' which fits the context of returning.
"were Leeli and Pudo were"
→ Suggestion: where Leeli and Pudo were
The word 'were' should be 'where' to indicate a location rather than the past tense of 'to be.'
"in side"
→ Suggestion: inside
The term 'in side' should be one word, 'inside,' to correctly describe being within a place.
"was trying as hard as she could to get out but she couldn't"
→ Suggestion: was trying as hard as she could to get out, but she couldn't.
A comma is needed before 'but' to separate the two independent clauses for better clarity.
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