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Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an intriguing scenario with clear action. With a few corrections in grammar and spelling, it can become even more polished and engaging.
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Nia and Pudo were captured by the fangs. Slarbs leg was wounded and bleedng.
Issues Summary
Grammar
"Slarbs leg"
→ Suggestion: Slarb's leg
The possessive form is needed here to indicate that the leg belongs to Slarb.
Spelling
"bleedng"
→ Suggestion: bleeding
There is a spelling error in 'bleedng'; it should be 'bleeding' with two 'e's.
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Nia and Pudo were captured by the fangs. Slarb's leg was wounded and bleeding