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Teacher's Summary

You've created an engaging narrative with interesting characters! Pay attention to spelling and grammar to enhance clarity and readability in your writing.

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A ratbadgger bit Slarb's leg and itwas wounded. While he was going back to the jail he was thingking of eating the chidren. when he past the other fangs they lagpht at him.

Issues Summary

Spelling "ratbadgger"

Suggestion: ratbagger

This word appears to be a misspelling. Double-checking spelling can help clarify your writing.

Spelling "itwas"

Suggestion: it was

There should be a space between 'it' and 'was' to separate the words correctly.

Spelling "thingking"

Suggestion: thinking

This word is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'thinking'.

Spelling "chidren"

Suggestion: children

This word is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'children'.

Grammar "when he past"

Suggestion: when he passed

The correct past tense of 'pass' is 'passed'. Using the correct tense helps maintain clarity.

Spelling "lagpht"

Suggestion: laughed

This word is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'laughed'.

Error Breakdown

Grammar 1
Spelling 5

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A ratbagger bit Slarb's leg and it was wounded. While he was going back to the jail he was thinking of eating the children. when he past the other fangs they laughed at