Teacher's Summary
You've created an intriguing narrative with a sense of adventure! With a bit more attention to spelling, your writing will be even more engaging and clear. Keep up the great work!
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When the children got back the fangs were ataking the house. One of the fangs captured Leeli. Then everybody got captured. The fangs were looking for a trasour and they thghout Nia had it.
Issues Summary
"ataking"
→ Suggestion: attacking
This is a spelling error; the correct spelling is 'attacking.' Double-checking your spelling can help convey your ideas more clearly.
"trasour"
→ Suggestion: treasure
This is another spelling error; the correct word is 'treasure.' Using the correct spelling will enhance the readability of your writing.
"thghout"
→ Suggestion: thought
This is a spelling mistake; the correct word is 'thought.' Paying attention to spelling will improve your overall writing quality.
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