Teacher's Summary
This writing sample effectively conveys the characters' emotions and interactions. With a few adjustments to punctuation and sentence structure, the clarity of your ideas can be greatly improved.
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Janner was thinking about how he missed his home. Tink was in the corner. Podo was awake with Leeli and Nia sleeping on him. Janner and Podo had a long talk and Tink heard it and looked out the window and Janner saw a shadow somebody was coming.
Issues Summary
"saw a shadow somebody was coming"
→ Suggestion: saw a shadow; somebody was coming
This sentence lacks clarity due to a missing punctuation mark. Adding a semicolon will separate the two independent clauses, making it easier to understand.
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