Teacher's Summary
Your writing effectively creates a sense of suspense and emotion. With a few corrections to grammar and spelling, your narrative will become even clearer and more engaging. Keep up the good work!
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Nia and Leeli were hiding. Their was somebody up stairs walking. And then their was a crash. Nia felt like a stuck animal. Then she felt like it was Osker and his book shelf fell over but when she heard the voice it was not him.
Issues Summary
"Their was somebody"
→ Suggestion: There was somebody
The word 'Their' is a possessive pronoun, while 'There' is used to indicate the existence of something. Use 'There' to correctly express that someone was present.
"up stairs"
→ Suggestion: upstairs
'Upstairs' should be written as one word when referring to the upper level of a building. This will improve the clarity of your writing.
"their was a crash"
→ Suggestion: there was a crash
Similar to the first error, 'their' is incorrect here; it should be 'there' to indicate the occurrence of a crash.
"Osker and his book shelf"
→ Suggestion: Oskar and his bookshelf
The name 'Osker' is likely a misspelling of 'Oskar,' and 'book shelf' should be combined into the single word 'bookshelf.' Correcting these will enhance your writing's accuracy.
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