Teacher's Summary
You've created an engaging narrative with a clear plot! Pay attention to sentence structure and spelling to enhance clarity and professionalism in your writing.
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Podo and the boys were going to save Leeli and Nia. Podo told the boys the plan. On their way they went into a house and in the house was oskar he was bleeding they asked what hapend and he said zouzab betrayd them.
Issues Summary
"oskar he was bleeding"
→ Suggestion: Oskar; he was bleeding
This sentence contains a run-on structure. Using a semicolon or a period would help separate the two independent clauses.
"hapend"
→ Suggestion: happened
The word 'hapend' is a misspelling. The correct spelling is 'happened'.
"zouzab betrayd"
→ Suggestion: Zouzab betrayed
The word 'betrayd' is a misspelling. The correct spelling is 'betrayed'.
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