Teacher's Summary
This writing sample has some interesting imagery and sets a vivid scene. With a few corrections in spelling and syntax, it can become even clearer and more impactful.
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Janneres hands were cold and were tide up. He could hear Tink screeming but all he could see was the sea and black red eyes.
Issues Summary
"tide up"
→ Suggestion: tied up
The word 'tide' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'tied,' which means to fasten or secure.
"screeming"
→ Suggestion: screaming
The correct spelling is 'screaming,' which refers to making a loud, sharp cry.
"black red eyes"
→ Suggestion: black-red eyes
When describing a color combination, a hyphen should be used to connect the two adjectives, resulting in 'black-red eyes.'
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