Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents a clear narrative with a sense of urgency. With a few adjustments to punctuation and verb tense, it can become even more polished and engaging.
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Podo was going to die. Nia asked Peet if he could heal Podo. Peet said that he healed the dog at the first well so they went there
Issues Summary
"Nia asked"
→ Suggestion: Nia asked
There is an unnecessary extra space between 'Nia' and 'asked'. Removing the extra space will improve the flow of the sentence.
"he healed the dog at the first well"
→ Suggestion: he had healed the dog at the first well
The use of past perfect tense ('had healed') is appropriate here to indicate that Peet's action of healing occurred before the time they went to the well.
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