Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an interesting scenario and effectively conveys the characters' intentions. Just be mindful of word choice to enhance clarity and accuracy in your writing.
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Three men meet in the middle of the dessert and talk about the holy spirit and God. One is Balthasar the Egyptian, the other two are Ethiopians. They confirm each other in the faith by telling stories and sharing news and just talking about God in general. It seems they are trying to start a movement towards Christianity.
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"middle of the dessert"
→ Suggestion: middle of the desert
The word 'dessert' refers to a sweet course served at the end of a meal, while 'desert' refers to a dry, barren area. Make sure to use 'desert' in this context.
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