Submission History
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nathaniel
April 30, 2026 at 02:10 PM
6 issues
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The author says that when he was writing a book he took a vacation to Hawaii for one year. He recharged in beauty, peace and quiet. He also learned that although talking about these habits he was not…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 3
nathaniel
April 29, 2026 at 02:43 PM
1 issue
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The author also says that synergizing is a system, and it includes all the first five habits. Be proactive, begin with the end in mind, put first things first, think win/win, seek to understand before…
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 28, 2026 at 02:03 PM
1 issue
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The sixth habit is synergize. That means that the whole is greater than the sum of its parts. One of those parts is the relationship of those parts.
This is probably the most important part, beca…
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 27, 2026 at 01:45 PM
7 issues
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The author gives the example of the fifth habit, which is seek to understand before being understood, in the example it is a son talking to his father about school. The father is trying to give his ad…
punctuation: 2
grammar: 4
capitalization: 1
nathaniel
April 23, 2026 at 08:41 PM
4 issues
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The author says that relationships are one of the keys to success. That's why it's so important to think win/win and others success is yours. He also says pride gets no pleasure out having something o…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 23, 2026 at 01:31 AM
3 issues
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The author says the fourth habit is think win/win. In certain situations you lose/win, win/lose, or lose/lose. The chart he draws is based on courage and consideration. So in the case of the most cons…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
nathaniel
April 21, 2026 at 01:02 PM
4 issues
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The author gives other examples of putting first things first, like a pilot and his passengers. He also talks about promises, and how you should just generally try and keep them. He says if you talk a…
grammar: 4
nathaniel
April 21, 2026 at 01:25 AM
2 issues
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The author says that the third habit is to put first things first. the order can go like mission statement, roles, goals. The main thing is putting urgent before not urgent.
If you put first th…
punctuation: 1
spelling: 1
nathaniel
April 16, 2026 at 04:20 PM
5 issues
The author says that the second habit is begin with the end in mind. So may people just do the next thing without reason. some Examples are getting the next degree or a promotion. But they sacrifice t…
grammar: 2
spelling: 1
punctuation: 2
nathaniel
April 15, 2026 at 04:26 PM
5 issues
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The author points out that your response and attitude is more important toward the outcome that directly affects you than what any other person can do. If act like Viktor Frankl in Nazi Germany you ca…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
punctuation: 2
nathaniel
April 14, 2026 at 04:17 PM
7 issues
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He says that the there are some important things about habits, such as they can always be broken, and they are always built up. You need three things to get a habit knowledge,(why to?),skill,(how to),…
grammar: 3
punctuation: 4
nathaniel
April 13, 2026 at 02:03 PM
2 issues
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PARAGRAPH 1
If you want to accomplish something you need to have the right attitude, but at the same …
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 09, 2026 at 01:27 PM
2 issues
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Judah is in love with Iras Balthasar's daughter but, plot twist, she is actually in love with Massala, and is going to reveal all Judah's secrets if he doesn't send an absolutely massive amount of mo…
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
nathaniel
April 07, 2026 at 02:15 PM
2 issues
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Judah is woken by Amrah and led to the house that he used to live in. according to her the romans don't actually own it and it's his. he moves in their taking a bunch of the stuff that Simon has gotte…
punctuation: 1
grammar: 1
nathaniel
April 06, 2026 at 02:44 PM
2 issues
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Judah goes to his old house to see if he can find information about his mother and sister. His mother and sister are also going to the house to see it one last time before getting cast out. Ben Hur in…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
April 03, 2026 at 03:42 PM
7 issues
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Judah has won the race, and at the same time crippled Masala for life. Unknown to him his sister and mother have been found while he was looking for them. He was sure and hoped that they had died well…
punctuation: 2
spelling: 2
grammar: 3
nathaniel
April 01, 2026 at 10:12 PM
2 issues
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Judah is starting a riot by getting people to bet money on him. the race is almost underway and Mathasala told everyone Judah's true origin. But it turns out to get him a bigger fan base.
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 31, 2026 at 02:57 PM
0 issues
Judah is dumbfounded to find that the sheik and Simon are in cahoots. And he also confirms his fear that Esther is in love with him. And Balthasar left with his daughter. They will come back for the r…
nathaniel
March 30, 2026 at 03:20 PM
0 issues
Judah is on a date with the Egyptian girl and she is telling him stories about Egypt. Mathasala is starting to figure out Ben Hur and Simon is also. The race is not very far away and Judah has the bes…
nathaniel
March 25, 2026 at 03:33 PM
3 issues
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Judah talks and talks with Balthazar the Egyptian. He would have like to go and find the Christ himself but he had no idea where to find him so he had to be satisfied with Balthazar's account. Simon i…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 2
nathaniel
March 24, 2026 at 05:40 PM
2 issues
Ilderim sheik is going to let Judah ride his horse in the race, he also introduces him to Balthazar. He is the Egyptian who went to meet baby Jesus.
punctuation: 1
grammar: 1
nathaniel
March 23, 2026 at 11:30 PM
0 issues
Mathasala is starting to hear of this son on Aurelius the Duumvir. But he in his normal calm state doesn't let on about his worry. Ben Hur is growing in Esther and Simon's favor as his deeds and dedic…
nathaniel
March 19, 2026 at 04:41 PM
0 issues
Judah is ready for the race. Simon is ready for Judah, and so is Esther. Judah's enemy is starting to lose fans and Judah gains them as the betting begins. Judah's enemy still doesn't know who Judah i…
nathaniel
March 18, 2026 at 03:23 PM
1 issue
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Ben Hur passes Simon's test and is getting ready for the chariot racing. He meets a person from his youth and plans to humiliate him in the race when he learns that he is the one who sent away his fam…
syntax: 1
nathaniel
March 17, 2026 at 02:06 PM
0 issues
Judah is told by Simon to go a certain grove that is full of delight. But what he didn't tell him was that it is a trap for people who are weak and easily turned astray. He is being tested by Simon to…
nathaniel
March 16, 2026 at 12:34 PM
5 issues
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After Ben-Hur left the former slave's house, whose name was Simon, he went farther into to town to find a place to stay. But Simon didn't think he was a Hur and so he sent a servant after him to watch…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 2
syntax: 2
nathaniel
March 13, 2026 at 02:41 PM
1 issue
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Ben Hur is released from slavery by his master during a pirate raid. He goes into town searching for his family. He meets one of his father's servants and his daughter Esther. He points Judah Ben Hur …
grammar: 1
nathaniel
March 12, 2026 at 12:18 PM
3 issues
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Judah is revealing to his sister his dream of becoming a solider, when the new head guy over Judea is traveling through. Judah goes to the roof to see him, but while up there he knocks a stone off th…
spelling: 1
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
March 11, 2026 at 01:41 PM
1 issue
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Herod is Dead and his sons are fighting for the throne when Rome just gives it to a random military officer to offend the Jews. We are then introduced to a new character named Judah. He is talking to …
spelling: 1
nathaniel
March 09, 2026 at 04:53 PM
1 issue
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Joseph and Mary came to Bethlehem looking for a place to stay. When they couldn't find anywhere to stay, the innkeeper led them to a house on the side of a mountain that hooked up to a cave. It was w…
spelling: 1
nathaniel
March 06, 2026 at 01:08 PM
2 issues
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We are brought to the market in Jerusalem and shown all the sins of the Jews. The Jews worship idols, and let people from other nations take part in there market. They sell things in the temple and ho…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
March 05, 2026 at 03:37 PM
1 issue
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Three men meet in the middle of the dessert and talk about the holy spirit and God. One is Balthasar the Egyptian, the other two are Ethiopians. They confirm each other in the faith by telling stories…
spelling: 1
nathaniel
March 04, 2026 at 08:42 PM
2 issues
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Robinson finds three men who have been captured by mutineers. He then leads his small army to save the ship that mutineers have. they succeed and the mutineers are killed and captured. Robinson then g…
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
nathaniel
March 03, 2026 at 02:41 PM
5 issues
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Robinson Crusoe has been teaching a cannibal he named Friday about being civilized, he is a good student and faithful comrade. they see the other cannibals and are going to save their prisoners. one …
punctuation: 4
capitalization: 1