Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents interesting ideas about criticism and historical figures. With some attention to grammatical details and clarity, your points will shine even brighter. Keep up the good work!
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The author says that people hate being criticized and he gives example of Abraham Lincoln who did not criticize and Theodore Roosevelt who did. It was the case that the person who Teddy criticized, Woodrow Wilson, decided not to be friends with him any more, even though he so absolutely right. But Abraham Lincoln did not criticize his general when he failed to destroy Robert E Lee's army and decided instead to think of the reasons why he might've blown the chance. They remained lifelong friends.
Issues Summary
"he gives example"
→ Suggestion: he gives an example
The phrase is missing the article 'an' before 'example,' which is necessary for proper grammatical structure.
"even though he so absolutely right"
→ Suggestion: even though he was so absolutely right
The verb 'was' is missing, which is needed to complete the past tense structure of the sentence.
"might've blown the chance"
→ Suggestion: might have blown the chance
Using 'might have' instead of the contraction 'might've' is more formal and appropriate for written text.
"decided not to be friends with him any more"
→ Suggestion: decided not to be friends with him anymore
'Anymore' is the correct spelling in this context, as it refers to a change in state or condition.
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