Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents interesting ideas and connections between biblical figures. With a few corrections in grammar and capitalization, it will be even clearer and more polished.
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Ben-Hur
The three men who met are the wise men who brought gifts to Jesus. They talk together about Moses and the ten plagues. The author tells about Israel and what its like at that time. The author also tells about Mary and how She is Joseph's niece.
Issues Summary
"what its like"
→ Suggestion: what it's like
The phrase should use 'it's' as a contraction for 'it is' instead of 'its', which indicates possession.
"how She is Joseph's niece"
→ Suggestion: how she is Joseph's niece
The word 'she' should be lowercase unless it starts a sentence, as it is not a proper noun.
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