Submission History
Review all writing submissions and their feedback.
Teddy Buchs
April 30, 2026 at 05:38 PM
4 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author says that reactive people are like a can of soda. You can shake them and they will suddenly pop. Proactive people are like water, you can shake them and shake them but they will never explo…
punctuation: 3
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 29, 2026 at 06:02 PM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
A man was complaining to the author about how his wife doesn't seem to love him anymore, and he doesn't seem to love her anymore. The author told him to love her. The man said that the author doesn't …
grammar: 2
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 28, 2026 at 09:25 PM
6 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author said that he had a son who was very shy and nervous around the public. When he was in 2nd grade his father signed him up for baseball practice and the son played dead the whole practice. Th…
grammar: 3
punctuation: 3
Teddy Buchs
April 27, 2026 at 08:03 PM
4 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author showed a bunch of things that people wrote to him. The things that people wrote were problems that they had. One guy said that he worked and worked and now has a thriving business, but he f…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 23, 2026 at 10:20 PM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author was talking about a boy who got hit in the head when he was younger. The boy was not good at math and his father told him that every night they were going to do math flashcards. The father …
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 23, 2026 at 01:19 AM
4 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author talks about a boss who has a worker who wasn't doing his work as well as he should have. The boss told him that he is doing a great job and that everybody who worked in the past was satisfi…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
syntax: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 21, 2026 at 10:14 PM
5 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author talked about a boss who's workers weren't doing what they were suppose to do. The boss wrote a number on the floor. When the workers saw it someone told them that it was because they didn't…
grammar: 3
syntax: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 20, 2026 at 05:22 PM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author was telling this story about a man who wanted his apartment rent to go down. The people around him told him not to bother because the landlord is a stubborn man. The guy had the landlord co…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 16, 2026 at 05:58 PM
2 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author told a story about a poor boy who dropped out of school when he was 13 and he became a famous editor. The boy interviewed tons of famous people asking them about themselves.
The author sai…
grammar: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 16, 2026 at 02:07 AM
4 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author talks about how when he was a salesman he always was nice the the people at this one store. One day the owner of the store didn't give him anything, and he came back later and the owner gav…
spelling: 2
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 14, 2026 at 03:49 PM
2 issues
Rewritten ✓
The second chapter was about what other people want. Show interest in other people. The 3rd chapter was about getting people to show what they really want.
The author talks about how when he goes …
grammar: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 13, 2026 at 05:18 PM
4 issues
Rewritten ✓
The author was talking about how a boss went to his workers who were required to wear protective helmets and he would yell at them to wear them when they didn't but they didn't listen. When the boss w…
grammar: 2
spelling: 2
Teddy Buchs
April 09, 2026 at 09:09 PM
2 issues
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
Judah is talking with an Egyptian woman who is very beautiful to him. Judah's old servant said that she practically controls him. She is the same woman who told him a story on the boat. Judah…
grammar: 1
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 09, 2026 at 01:23 AM
2 issues
Rewritten ✓
Judah talked about how he saw Jesus turn water into wine, heal lepers, heal the blind, and do other miracles. His old servant heard that and ran to tell Judah's mother and sister. They think that if t…
grammar: 1
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 08, 2026 at 01:10 AM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
Judah travels and stops at a place where a lot of people are. There is a Nazarite who is saying," behold the lamb of God who takes away the sin of the world". Judah new that the savior was there and h…
punctuation: 2
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 06, 2026 at 09:29 PM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
Judah goes to a group of guys and they talk. While they are talking someone is fighting the priests and they go and fight them. After they fight them Judah tells them to meet him in Bethlehem and they…
grammar: 2
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
April 04, 2026 at 02:34 AM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
Judah's mother and his sister are in prison for 8 years. Somebody lets them go and they are lepers. They beg by the gate and then see their old slave. They talk to her and she brings them foo…
Teddy Buchs
April 03, 2026 at 02:42 AM
0 issues
Beb-Hur
Judah is on a porch and a man comes. The man was told by Messila to kill Judah. Judah talks with the guy for a while and they realize that the man had met Judah's dad. Judah hires him to go …
Teddy Buchs
April 01, 2026 at 09:05 PM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
Judah starts the race and people are betting against him, saying that Messila will win. Judah is using the best horses there and beats Messila. Messila gets injured and people thought that he…
Teddy Buchs
April 01, 2026 at 12:21 AM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
The father and daughter who were mentioned before told Judah that they took the money that Judah had left, and made it into 600 denarii. Judah was the richest man, not a king. Judah gave then 500 of i…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 31, 2026 at 07:04 PM
0 issues
Judah is trying out the horses. He goes on a boat with this Egyptian woman and she tells him a story. She says there was a girl who was the most beautiful girl there was. The king married her but she …
Teddy Buchs
March 25, 2026 at 01:25 AM
3 issues
Rewritten ✓
Judah meets a traveler and goes to the stadium with him. He decides to rent out some animals so he could compete against Mellissa who was the Roman he used to be friends with. The father and daughter …
punctuation: 1
syntax: 1
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 23, 2026 at 11:29 PM
0 issues
Judah is looking for his mother and sister. He stops at somebody's house and tells him who he is and asks them if they have seen them. They say no and he leaves. The father of the family tells his dau…
Teddy Buchs
March 18, 2026 at 07:22 PM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The ship sails to sea. The ship gets in a fight at sea and gets sunk. Judah survives and holds on to a board. The Roman who was talking to him before gives him his ring to free him from slave…
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 17, 2026 at 11:58 PM
5 issues
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
Three years later a Roman is goes onto a ship and askes about the rowers. Someone tells him that they were slaves. The roman goes to look at them and he finds Judah. Judah explains why he is …
grammar: 2
spelling: 3
Teddy Buchs
March 16, 2026 at 06:10 PM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The Jew who went home was named Judah. Judah lived with his mother and sister. They were rich. Judah tells his family that he wants to be a soldier. Right after Judah tells them that he hears…
punctuation: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 12, 2026 at 07:47 PM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The Jew goes home and he is acting strange. His servant brings him food and askes him why he is acting strange. He tells her that his friend came back from Rome after 5 years. His friend is c…
spelling: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 11, 2026 at 07:39 PM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The wise men go and visit the baby Jesus. The author talks about 21 years later. Herod died a year after Jesus was born. He died such a miserable death that the Christians believed that he w…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 11, 2026 at 01:35 PM
2 issues
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The three men who where mentioned in the beginning came to Bethlehem to see the baby. They come to one of Herod's soldiers and ask him where the Christ, the king of Israel is born. The soldie…
grammar: 1
syntax: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 09, 2026 at 04:40 PM
1 issue
Rewritten ✓
Ben-Hur
The author describes Mary and Joseph. He says that Mary had golden hair and Joseph was a carpenter. Mary and Joseph go the Bethlehem and Mary gives birth to a baby in a cave. People come to v…
grammar: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 06, 2026 at 02:46 AM
2 issues
Ben-Hur
The three men who met are the wise men who brought gifts to Jesus. They talk together about Moses and the ten plagues. The author tells about Israel and what its like at that time. The author…
grammar: 1
capitalization: 1
Teddy Buchs
March 04, 2026 at 08:46 PM
0 issues
Ben-Hur
A man is traveling through the desert and is lonely. He comes to a stop and gets off of his camel. He sets up a tent, eats, and feeds the animal. The man sees someone coming and thanks God. …
Teddy Buchs
March 03, 2026 at 07:04 PM
3 issues
Walking Out
A boy named David goes hunting with his father for grouse. H shoots many shots but does not hit any. The next year his father takes him moose hunting, and they stay at a cabin each night…
spelling: 1
punctuation: 2
Teddy Buchs
March 03, 2026 at 06:56 PM
5 issues
Rewritten ✓
Walking Out
A boy named David goes hunting with his father for grouse. He shoots a ton of shots but does not hit any. The next year his father takes him moose hunting, and they stay at a cabin each n…
syntax: 2
punctuation: 2
grammar: 1