Teacher's Summary
Your writing presents an interesting perspective on the market in Jerusalem, but be mindful of grammar and punctuation. Paying attention to these details will enhance the clarity and professionalism of your work.
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We are brought to the market in Jerusalem and shown all the sins of the Jews. The Jews worship idols, and let people from other nations take part in there market. They sell things in the temple and holy places. although we are then introduced to Mary and Joseph who are going to Bethlehem.
Issues Summary
"there market"
→ Suggestion: their market
The word 'there' is used incorrectly; it should be 'their' to indicate possession.
"although we are then introduced"
→ Suggestion: Although we are then introduced
The sentence should start with a capital 'A' since it follows a period and begins a new sentence.
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