Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents a clear and concise summary of the story of Mary and Joseph. With a few minor grammatical adjustments, it can be even more polished and effective.
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Ben-Hur
The author describes Mary and Joseph. He says that Mary had golden hair and Joseph was a carpenter. Mary and Joseph go the Bethlehem and Mary gives birth to a baby in a cave. People come to visit the cave because the baby was Jesus. Most of the people who came to the cave laughed, but some believed that the baby was Jesus.
Issues Summary
"go the Bethlehem"
→ Suggestion: go to Bethlehem
The preposition 'to' is needed before 'Bethlehem' to indicate direction. This small adjustment will clarify the sentence.
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