Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an intriguing narrative with engaging character interactions. With a few minor spelling corrections and attention to detail, your writing will become even stronger!
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Herod is Dead and his sons are fighting for the throne when Rome just gives it to a random military officer to offend the Jews. We are then introduced to a new character named Judah. He is talking to a Roman named Masatha. He seems to have known him at one point but when we meet him they are ending their freindship.
Issues Summary
"freindship"
→ Suggestion: friendship
The word 'freindship' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'friendship'. Double-checking spelling can help improve clarity.
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