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This writing sample provides a clear narrative and presents historical context effectively. With minor grammatical adjustments, it can be even more polished and engaging.

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The wise men go and visit the baby Jesus. The author talks about 21 years later. Herod died a year after Jesus was born. He died such a miserable death that the Christians believed that he was being punished. The author then talks about two young men who look like brothers. the older was a Roman and the younger was a Jew. The Roman complained that Jews never changed.

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Grammar "the older was a Roman"

→ Suggestion: The older was a Roman

The sentence should begin with a capital letter to maintain proper sentence structure.

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Ben-Hur The wise men go and visit the baby Jesus. The author talks about 21 years later. Herod died a year after Jesus was born. He died such a miserable death that the Christians believed that he was being punished. The author then talks about two young men who look like brothers. The older was a Roman and the younger was a Jew. The Roman complained that Jews never changed.
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