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Ben-Hur
The Jew goes home and he is acting strange. His servant brings him food and askes him why he is acting strange. He tells her that his friend came back from Rome after 5 years. His friend is completely different. The Jew talks to his mother about it.

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Ben-Hur The Jew goes home and he is acting strange. His servant brings him food and asks him why he is acting strange. He tells her that his friend came back from Rome after 5 years. His friend is completely different. The Jew talks to his mother about it.