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This writing sample presents a clear narrative and effectively conveys the main events. With a few minor adjustments, it can be even stronger!
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Ben Hur is released from slavery by his master during a pirate raid. He goes into town searching for his family. He meets one of his father's servants and his daughter Esther. He points Judah Ben Hur in the right direction and he goes to search for them in a another town.
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"a another town"
→ Suggestion: another town
The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'another.' Simply using 'another town' is correct.
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He goes to search for them in another town.