Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an engaging narrative with clear character actions. With a few minor adjustments in punctuation, it will flow even better. Keep up the good work!
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Ben-Hur
The Jew who went home was named Judah. Judah lived with his mother and sister. They were rich. Judah tells his family that he wants to be a soldier. Right after Judah tells them that he hears soldiers walking down the road. Judah goes to the window to see them and bumps a brick off of the wall. The brick hits a person and Judah gets arrested.l
Issues Summary
"arrested.l"
→ Suggestion: arrested.
There is an unnecessary 'l' at the end of the sentence. Ensure that sentences end with the correct punctuation mark.
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