Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an interesting narrative with some engaging elements. By focusing on correcting spelling and grammar errors, you can enhance clarity and improve the overall quality of your writing.
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Ben-Hur
Three years later a Roman is goes onto a ship and askes about the rowers. Someone tells him that they were slaves. The roman goes to look at them and he finds Judah. Judah explains why he is there and askes about his family. The Roman does not know about his family. The Roman askes Judah what he would do if he got freed. Judah tells him he wants to be a soldier.
Issues Summary
"is goes"
→ Suggestion: goes
The phrase 'is goes' is incorrect; it should simply be 'goes' to maintain proper verb tense.
"askes"
→ Suggestion: asks
The word 'askes' is a misspelling; the correct spelling is 'asks'.
"askes about his family"
→ Suggestion: asks about his family
Again, 'askes' is misspelled; it should be 'asks' for correct spelling.
"The roman"
→ Suggestion: The Roman
The term 'Roman' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun referring to a nationality.
"askes Judah what he would do if he got freed"
→ Suggestion: asks Judah what he would do if he got freed
The word 'askes' is misspelled; it should be 'asks' to be correct.
Error Breakdown
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