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This writing sample presents an intriguing narrative with clear character motivations. With a few adjustments for clarity and flow, it can become even more engaging.
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Ben Hur passes Simon's test and is getting ready for the chariot racing. He meets a person from his youth and plans to humiliate him in the race when he learns that he is the one who sent away his family. Simon is getting ready to have Judah as his master and so is Esther his daughter.
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"so is Esther his daughter"
→ Suggestion: and so is his daughter Esther
The original phrasing is awkward and can be improved for clarity. Reordering the words makes the sentence flow better.
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And so is his daughter Esther.