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This writing sample is clear and effectively conveys the excitement of the race. The repetition of 'Judah' could be varied for improved flow, but overall, it's a strong piece that sets up an engaging scenario.
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Judah is ready for the race. Simon is ready for Judah, and so is Esther. Judah's enemy is starting to lose fans and Judah gains them as the betting begins. Judah's enemy still doesn't know who Judah is.
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