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This writing sample effectively conveys a clear narrative with a straightforward plot. The sentences are well-structured, and the progression of events is easy to follow. Keep up the good work and continue to develop your storytelling skills!
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Judah is looking for his mother and sister. He stops at somebody's house and tells him who he is and asks them if they have seen them. They say no and he leaves. The father of the family tells his daughter that he is the one who took Judah's money and invested it. He wanted to show Judah what he did but he did not believe it was him.
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