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This writing sample effectively introduces characters and sets up the narrative context. The flow is engaging, and the use of names adds depth to the story. Keep up the great work in developing your characters and their relationships!
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Mathasala is starting to hear of this son on Aurelius the Duumvir. But he in his normal calm state doesn't let on about his worry. Ben Hur is growing in Esther and Simon's favor as his deeds and dedication are proving him to be a Hur. We meet the Sheik Ilderim as well who is helping Judah train for the races.
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