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Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an interesting narrative and provides context about the characters involved. With a few adjustments to punctuation and capitalization, it can become even clearer and more polished.
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Ilderim sheik is going to let Judah ride his horse in the race, he also introduces him to Balthazar. He is the Egyptian who went to meet baby Jesus.
Issues Summary
Punctuation
"race, he also"
→ Suggestion: race; he also
The comma is incorrectly used to connect two independent clauses. A semicolon or a period should be used instead to separate them.
Grammar
"who went to meet baby Jesus"
→ Suggestion: who went to meet Baby Jesus
The term 'Baby Jesus' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.
Error Breakdown
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