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This writing sample presents a clear narrative with engaging details. The flow of ideas is smooth, and the characters are introduced effectively. Keep up the good work and continue to develop your storytelling skills!
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Judah is on a date with the Egyptian girl and she is telling him stories about Egypt. Mathasala is starting to figure out Ben Hur and Simon is also. The race is not very far away and Judah has the best horses in town, and he's sure he'll win.
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