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Judah is dumbfounded to find that the sheik and Simon are in cahoots. And he also confirms his fear that Esther is in love with him. And Balthasar left with his daughter. They will come back for the race though. The race is within a week and he is now starting a recovery process from his months of training. Everybody now knows that he is the son of Hur.
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