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This writing sample presents a clear narrative with interesting elements. The flow of the story is engaging, and the characters are introduced well. Keep up the good work and consider adding more detail to enhance the imagery and emotional depth!
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Judah is trying out the horses. He goes on a boat with this Egyptian woman and she tells him a story. She says there was a girl who was the most beautiful girl there was. The king married her but she was not happy. Then she married the gardener's son who she knew for a while.
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