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This writing sample effectively conveys the narrative and character relationships. With a few minor grammatical adjustments, it will be even clearer and more polished.
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The father and daughter who were mentioned before told Judah that they took the money that Judah had left, and made it into 600 denarii. Judah was the richest man, not a king. Judah gave then 500 of it and asked them to help find his mother and his sister.
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"gave then 500"
→ Suggestion: gave them 500
The word 'then' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'them' to refer to the people Judah is addressing.
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The father and daughter who were mentioned before told Judah that they took the money that Judah had left, and made it into 600 denarii. Judah was the richest man, not a king. Judah gave them 500 of it and asked them to help find his mother and his sister.