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This writing sample provides a clear and engaging summary of the events in 'Ben-Hur.' The narrative flows well, and the use of details helps to convey the tension of the race. Great job capturing the essence of the story!

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Ben-Hur Judah starts the race and people are betting against him, saying that Messila will win. Judah is using the best horses there and beats Messila. Messila gets injured and people thought that he had died. Judah said that he did not die but he would not be able to walk ever again.

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