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Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an intriguing scenario with potential for development. With some attention to punctuation and clarity in phrasing, your ideas can shine even brighter!
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Judah is starting a riot by getting people to bet money on him. the race is almost underway and Mathasala told everyone Judah's true origin. But it turns out to get him a bigger fan base.
Issues Summary
Punctuation
"the race is almost underway"
→ Suggestion: The race is almost underway
The sentence should start with a capital letter to indicate the beginning of a new sentence.
Syntax
"to get him a bigger fan base"
→ Suggestion: to help him gain a bigger fan base
The phrase is unclear; using 'help him gain' clarifies the intended meaning.
Error Breakdown
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The race is almost underway.