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This writing sample presents a clear narrative with an interesting premise. The flow of events is easy to follow, and the dialogue hints at deeper relationships, which is engaging. Keep up the good work and consider expanding on character motivations for even greater depth!
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Beb-Hur Judah is on a porch and a man comes. The man was told by Messila to kill Judah. Judah talks with the guy for a while and they realize that the man had met Judah's dad. Judah hires him to go and kill Messila.
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