Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents an intriguing narrative with clear character motivations. With a few minor corrections in spelling and punctuation, it will enhance clarity and flow.
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Judah goes to his old house to see if he can find information about his mother and sister. His mother and sister are also going to the house to see it one last time before getting cast out. Ben Hur inspects the house long before they get there and falls asleep on a step near by. His mother and sister see him but dare not touch him. Later he is woken by the servant of the house Amrah.
Issues Summary
"near by"
→ Suggestion: nearby
'Nearby' is the correct spelling when used as an adverb to indicate proximity.
"the servant of the house Amrah"
→ Suggestion: the servant of the house, Amrah
A comma is needed before 'Amrah' to clarify that it is an appositive providing additional information about 'the servant of the house.'
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