Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents a clear narrative and captures the essence of the story. With a few adjustments to syntax and punctuation, it can become even more polished and engaging.
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Robinson finds three men who have been captured by mutineers. He then leads his small army to save the ship that mutineers have. they succeed and the mutineers are killed and captured. Robinson then gets to go home to England.
Issues Summary
"that mutineers have."
→ Suggestion: that the mutineers have.
The phrase is missing the article 'the' before 'mutineers', which clarifies that you are referring to a specific group.
"they succeed"
→ Suggestion: They succeed
The sentence should start with a capital letter to maintain proper sentence structure.
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