Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents some interesting ideas about time management and prioritization. With a few corrections in punctuation and spelling, your message will be even clearer and more impactful!
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The author says that the third habit is to put first things first. the order can go like mission statement, roles, goals. The main thing is putting urgent before not urgent.
If you put first things first and begin with the end in mind and have a good attitude and stick to the mechanics then you can succeed. He lists all kinds of ways to keep time managed.
He also puts in his planner all the different catagories and lists them in order like family, work and church. And does each thing in order of importance.
Issues Summary
"the order can go like mission statement, roles, goals."
→ Suggestion: The order can go like this: mission statement, roles, goals.
The sentence should start with a capital letter and include 'this' for clarity, as well as a colon to introduce the list.
"catagories"
→ Suggestion: categories
The word 'catagories' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'categories'.
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