Teacher's Summary
This writing sample presents some interesting ideas, but there are several grammatical errors that need attention. Focusing on the correct use of contractions will enhance clarity and professionalism in your writing.
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The author gives other examples of putting first things first, like a pilot and his passengers. He also talks about promises, and how you should just generally try and keep them. He says if you talk about someone behind their back it's bad enough that your talking about them, but also what are you communicating to the person your talking to.
Then he says how great the person your having the talk with would think you are if you just suggested to go and offer a solution to the person you talking about. He would feel he could trust you. He also says that you need to delegate all resources.
He also says they're are two sides, you can feel pressured by what you do, or not. If you feel pressured it's either because you have a healthy sense, or you procrastinate and feel pressure all of a sudden. You can also not feel pressured if you work effectively. He made a chart and on the chart it shows that procrastinating gets you what you put in, working effectively gets you more than you put in, and wasting time gets you nothing.
Issues Summary
"your talking"
→ Suggestion: you're talking
The contraction 'you're' (you are) should be used instead of 'your' (possessive form) in this context.
"your talking to"
→ Suggestion: you're talking to
Again, 'you're' is the correct contraction for 'you are', which fits the context of the sentence.
"your having the talk"
→ Suggestion: you're having the talk
The contraction 'you're' should be used here instead of 'your', as it indicates 'you are' in this context.
"they're are two sides"
→ Suggestion: there are two sides
'They're' is a contraction for 'they are', while 'there' is the correct word to indicate existence in this sentence.
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