Teacher's Summary
Your writing presents thoughtful insights on relationships and understanding in communication. With some attention to grammar and punctuation, your ideas will shine even more clearly. Keep up the good work!
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The author says that relationships are one of the keys to success. That's why it's so important to think win/win and others success is yours. He also says pride gets no pleasure out having something only having more than someone else.
He says the 5th habit is to seek to understand before being understood. So in a debate nobody makes any headway if they don't care about the other argument. If they tried to understand what the other person thinks and why then they can try to make resolutions.
It's important in work setting to. If someone has a problem then for instance with how somebody else does something then, he should try first to understand why the other person does it before just trying to impose his will on the other person.
Issues Summary
"others success is yours"
→ Suggestion: others' success is yours
The possessive form is needed here to indicate that the success belongs to others. Adding an apostrophe makes it clear.
"out having something only having more than someone else"
→ Suggestion: out of having something, only having more than someone else
The phrase is missing the preposition 'of' to clarify the relationship between the ideas. This small addition improves clarity.
"in work setting to."
→ Suggestion: in a work setting.
The phrase needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. This helps the sentence flow better.
"then for instance with how somebody else does something then, he should try first"
→ Suggestion: then, for instance, with how somebody else does something, he should try first
Commas are needed to separate clauses and phrases for better readability. This helps the reader follow your thoughts more easily.
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