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This writing sample presents thoughtful insights on success and personal growth. With a few adjustments for grammatical clarity, your ideas will shine even brighter!
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The author also says that synergizing is a system, and it includes all the first five habits. Be proactive, begin with the end in mind, put first things first, think win/win, seek to understand before being understood.
The seventh habit is to sharpen the saw. That means to renew your efforts and reclaim your goals and principles. Because every so often life becomes stale and pointless. So just rethink and remember and redefine your success.
It seems the biggest part of success is your own happiness and emotions. If you can't be happy striving to succeed then it becomes infinitely harder. So every so often you just need to redirect.
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"Because every so often life becomes stale and pointless."
→ Suggestion: Every so often, life becomes stale and pointless.
The sentence begins with 'Because,' which makes it a dependent clause that should not stand alone. Starting with 'Every so often' makes it a complete sentence.
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